Anonymous1: Face seems off(this is a minor thing as a different rendition of the character affects face)
Back is wide,
buttocks too low.
Thighs seem rather large
Right thigh larger than left
Colors are good, bright and radiating.
Some clean up outside: under left arm and around left back, as well as left thigh, and finally right of neck.
Outline is a nice size, though there is a little too much on left side of left leg.
Also you could show her vagina, it's just all black, not sure if that's the point(her not being seen newd).
ZDragonX: ^it’s not like I drew it, unless you mean you like my choice of things I upload, if so then thanks.
And to the random anonymous, I never knew this was a site for images to be reviewed, I was under the impression that this site was for, well you know, jacking off to images of almost anything. It’s not like the actual person who drew this will see your comment so what’s the point. So why don’t you stop wasting my time with your pointless comment and do what you really came to this site to do. Also I’d like to see you do better art then this, which is probably very unlikely.
Anonymous2(1): "ZDragonX: ^ Please explain "
You wanted to know why it was "Not so great." So I'd appreciate if you didn't get mad when I explained.
Coming off as the artist of this work for even asking I went ahead and implied you were the artist. I humbly apologize for that but I will not apologize for /ic/ing what is wrong with the image(which, once again, you asked for).
Someone needs to study anatomy more. Thighs are generally thicker from the side. God I hate it when people have so much confidence in themselves when they're wrong.
Apart from that the rest of the critic was perfectly acceptable, but I feel like that one thing just took away all credibility.
Anonymous4: Boy I sure do wish I could turn my head almost completely around without turning my shoulders more than 1/3rd the distance.
Also, that tower torso.
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Back is wide,
buttocks too low.
Thighs seem rather large
Right thigh larger than left
Colors are good, bright and radiating.
Some clean up outside: under left arm and around left back, as well as left thigh, and finally right of neck.
Outline is a nice size, though there is a little too much on left side of left leg.
Also you could show her vagina, it's just all black, not sure if that's the point(her not being seen newd).
Good enough Dragon?
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And to the random anonymous, I never knew this was a site for images to be reviewed, I was under the impression that this site was for, well you know, jacking off to images of almost anything. It’s not like the actual person who drew this will see your comment so what’s the point. So why don’t you stop wasting my time with your pointless comment and do what you really came to this site to do. Also I’d like to see you do better art then this, which is probably very unlikely.
You wanted to know why it was "Not so great." So I'd appreciate if you didn't get mad when I explained.
Coming off as the artist of this work for even asking I went ahead and implied you were the artist. I humbly apologize for that but I will not apologize for /ic/ing what is wrong with the image(which, once again, you asked for).
Someone needs to study anatomy more. Thighs are generally thicker from the side. God I hate it when people have so much confidence in themselves when they're wrong.
Apart from that the rest of the critic was perfectly acceptable, but I feel like that one thing just took away all credibility.
Also, that tower torso.