ButtercupSaiyan: I can't put my finger on why exactly this picture doesn't work. It's not drawn amazingly, but it's not done badly; the lineart is decent; there's some nice rounded shadows...
AnonV3: It's ... it's the entire head. They just, over all, look more 'stylized human' than 'MLP pony' to me. Twi's vag is more on her thigh than where it should be. Dash's legs are just wrong, it's like the artist is more used to drawing human figures and almost defaulted to that style here. Also, her wings are all kinds of scraggly no.
I guess that's it. It's like the artist drew two human figures fucking in this position and then tried to manipulate/modify them to be MLP.
Mike5626: @AnonV3: I'm the autor of this pic and thank you for comment, yes i'm used to draw humans and I began to draw ponies et r34 ponies recently. I will try to learn more ponies bodies :)
(sorry for my poor english)
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I think it's the faces.
I guess that's it. It's like the artist drew two human figures fucking in this position and then tried to manipulate/modify them to be MLP.
(sorry for my poor english)