• The shading is a bit too... big? It's taking up a bit too much space.
• Johanna's facial structure is a bit off. The eyes are a bit too far apart, the shading on the nose is unnecessary, the tip of her nose should be slightly more pronounced, and the top of her hair is a little short.
I don't mean to make you feel bad for your mistakes, I just want you to know what you should improve on in the future.
Everything else is pretty spot-on, man. You have some exemplary art skills, so keep at it.
And in the event that you aren't the original artist of this piece, at least I tried.
• The shading is a bit too... big? It's taking up a bit too much space.
• Johanna's facial structure is a bit off. The eyes are a bit too far apart, the shading on the nose is unnecessary, the tip of her nose should be slightly more pronounced, and the top of her hair is a little short.
I don't mean to make you feel bad for your mistakes, I just want you to know what you should improve on in the future.
Everything else is pretty spot-on, man. You have some exemplary art skills, so keep at it.
And in the event that you aren't the original artist of this piece, at least I tried.