KM: Was expecting a few people to comment about the coloring, potential improvements etc...but i guess only a few of the professional people here would do that.
Anonymous8: Her skin color is correct, it's just the type of body the animator decided to draw with it, all otherwise good pick. I agree with Ora we need more Ed!
Anonymous9(8): Her skin color is correct, it's just the type of body the animator decided to draw with it, all otherwise good pick. I agree with Ora we needs more Ed!
pkt: Well here are some tips. The clouds need a little more definition. The ocean waves could be more vivid. I think the cheek marks are supposed to be a little closer to orange. Try keeping a more consistent light angle next time. All in all though it looks very good. I do art sometimes but I don't really like to show it. This is quite nice if an artist's opinion matters to you. I considered coloring this back when I saw it on AerisDies sometime last year but I never got to it.
Anonymous11: The problem with these boobies is they have so much definition when they're basically fried eggs.. or even pancakes. They should blend in more smoothly with her chest.
Urbane_Guerrilla: Anon4 is carefully ignorant of genetics: homosexuality does not spread, nor increase over the generations, nor does it reduce. That means it is not hereditary, but a developmental quirk, and dominant in about 5% of the male population and 2% of the female. Generation after generation. It can hardly be said to run in families.
Urbane_Guerrilla: RTTopic: However, Ed WHPT4 is so bizarro-hawt I have trouble caring *what's* hiding in her bicycle shorts, I still wanna rub up against it. Zero-gee or Earth-normal grav.
Anonymous20: I gots a problem. The placement of the left nip. I had the B&W sketch of this and put it a little closer to center. Also, what happened to the sweat beads all over her body?
Anonymous21: <KM *not logged in*> I removed them just because I didn't feel comfortable with water droplets at the time. I still have trouble with them to be honest.
Anonymous23: anon4, as most, if not all straight people such as yourself, love to look at girl-on-girl, thinking it makes you the ultimate straight-ass...
IT DOES NOT... you are technically looking at gay porn, so that makes you gay... BAM!
also... since guys consider pics of men alone as 'gay' ...that must mean single female images are also gay...
Anonymous26: Lol guys seriously she's only supposed to be like 10 years old. It would be kinda creepy and weird if she had gigantic boobs at that age. And not all girls in anime have huge boobs. For example, look at Winry from Fullmetal.. ;P And Sakura from Naruto.. =p
Anonymous27: anon4 gay is not genetic it is caused by eating to much soybean products as a child (it causes a estrogen overload which make little boys crave cock)
Was good coloring practice. So thanks to whoever uploaded the line-art.
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Check that homo-phobia at the door, sir!
In the show, she's rail-thin and has little-to-no curvature.
It's called "keeping true to the medium" you boob-obsessed douches! TRY IT SOMETIME!!
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Anyway, needs smaller boobs. And a less manly chest. Looks like she has boobs on top of pecs.
The shadowing of her face and legs is nice, but could be done better on her chest and back. It's a little too light as it is right now.
IT DOES NOT... you are technically looking at gay porn, so that makes you gay... BAM!
also... since guys consider pics of men alone as 'gay' ...that must mean single female images are also gay...
NO MATTER WHAT, YOU ARE GAY IF YOU LOOK AT PORN!
so stop being a bigot, ya fucking asshole.
guess we're all gay then arnet we O_o
Let's leave it at that.
WTF am I reading in the comments?
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