Justonehuman: I'm glad for those who enjoy the draw :) the engrish is for make the pic funnier , of course! ... but just for curiosity, how should be the dialogues in actual english?
Urbane_Guerrilla: @Justonehuman: Insert comma after accepted. (Admittedly, comma usage can get slippery and tricky to handle precisely.)
Rather than that Russian-present-tense construction in her balloon, something like I'm glad I can help solve your problems, guys would be more like native speech.
When it comes to erotic writing, I always counsel setting it down in your native tongue. THEN, get a skilful, bilingual translator. Trying to do erotica in a language not your own, regardless of motivation, is a sure way to run up on the rocks. Inevitably detumescing.
Dr_Jackal: If real life problems were solved this way, the world would be a little better. Maybe you'd lose but at least you'd get some pussy in the process.
MAKE EM BIGGER
i lul'd at Syndra and Akali in the background
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(Admittedly, comma usage can get slippery and tricky to handle precisely.)
Rather than that Russian-present-tense construction in her balloon, something like I'm glad I can help solve your problems, guys would be more like native speech.
When it comes to erotic writing, I always counsel setting it down in your native tongue. THEN, get a skilful, bilingual translator. Trying to do erotica in a language not your own, regardless of motivation, is a sure way to run up on the rocks. Inevitably detumescing.