Lenbasisky: "Garbage". Mmmh..it's pretty ironic considering that it's a word which is from a comment without motivation, not constructive and so useless.
The coloring and shading is good, that goes without saying.
The bodies need more balance, the mouth is too big compared to her head. At least make it bigger to fit the mouth better.
The cocks look like swollen legs. I get having big dicks in porn, but have it look like a penis and not make it so bumpy.
The lines across her arm and butt are weird. Also, the meaty legs with skinny arms throw it off staying consistent.
Overall, these factors make it look more grotesque than arousing.
I'll give you some.
The coloring and shading is good, that goes without saying.
The bodies need more balance, the mouth is too big compared to her head. At least make it bigger to fit the mouth better.
The cocks look like swollen legs. I get having big dicks in porn, but have it look like a penis and not make it so bumpy.
The lines across her arm and butt are weird. Also, the meaty legs with skinny arms throw it off staying consistent.
Overall, these factors make it look more grotesque than arousing.
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