Anonymous2: @Penthouss: OK, I've said this a thousand times before, but I'm going to say it again since you asked: showing teeth, especially the lower jaw teeth and ESPECIALLY the gums above or below them, looks REALLY unnatural and creepy. You don't see that many of someone's teeth when they smile, they have to deliberately pull their lips back as far as they can. Try looking at yourself in a mirror and smiling (naturally; don't do a cheesy fake grin like you've been dosed with Joker Venom). It's the reason lipless monsters like the Nemesis from Resident Evil 3 look so freaky. Be VERY careful drawing bare teeth and gums, and DON'T do it on a character intended to be erotic.
Also, the way her cheeks are bulging up towards her squinted eyes looks ugly as well. She looks like she's wearing a particularly ugly Halloween mask, like Richard Nixon crossed with the Green Goblin.
It's a shame, because the rest of the animation is really quite good.
Penthouss: @Anonymous:
Unlike you can think, this is not unnatural, I myself smile a lot and, I have a broad smile showing my upper gum similar to my evelynn drawing.
(Example of broad smile found on google: Julia Roberts http://www.tendances-de-mode.com/images/upload/1458918491.jpg)
We are not all made of the same mold, accept this.
After you have the right not to like the alliance of creepy and the erotic, I like.
But its like the futanari.
It is necessary for all the taste.
Anonymous4(2): @Penthouss: OK, suit yourself, but don't ask for criticism then say "your criticism is wrong". The face completely wrecks it, as far as I'm concerned. It's HIDEOUS.
Anonymous5(2): @Penthouss: OK, suit yourself, but don't ask for criticism then say "your criticism is wrong". The face completely wrecks it, as far as I'm concerned. It's HIDEOUS.
And that pic of Julia Roberts is pretty creepy too, to be blunt.
Penthouss: @Anonymous:
Very well, the purpose of a criticism is that it is constructive, and it was it I thank you.
But I also have the right to defend my opinions.
The prospect of evelynn's face is missed, well, I will work more his next time
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Does something bother you in a creepy smile?
If a few things are wrong, any criticism is good to take
Also, the way her cheeks are bulging up towards her squinted eyes looks ugly as well. She looks like she's wearing a particularly ugly Halloween mask, like Richard Nixon crossed with the Green Goblin.
It's a shame, because the rest of the animation is really quite good.
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Unlike you can think, this is not unnatural, I myself smile a lot and, I have a broad smile showing my upper gum similar to my evelynn drawing.
(Example of broad smile found on google: Julia Roberts http://www.tendances-de-mode.com/images/upload/1458918491.jpg)
We are not all made of the same mold, accept this.
After you have the right not to like the alliance of creepy and the erotic, I like.
But its like the futanari.
It is necessary for all the taste.
And that pic of Julia Roberts is pretty creepy too, to be blunt.
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Very well, the purpose of a criticism is that it is constructive, and it was it I thank you.
But I also have the right to defend my opinions.
The prospect of evelynn's face is missed, well, I will work more his next time
Obviously anon never fapped to monstergirls before
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