Roflcakes: @Faptacular: Aw, that was sweet! Really nailed the whole "trying hard not to be overly loud and passionate, but wanting to anyway" thing. The casual mood was really well executed too; far too often that comes off forced or fake as all hell.
bAv-R34: @Faptacular: Just got around to reading it, it's actually very well written and also very relatable. Sure Voslar's a good writer, but his work is a bit formulaic- it's nice to have a change of pace now and then.
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Oh, and insta-bookmarked.
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