Lapp: The face is too busy, as much as I love you Smudge (mostly for the reason that you can take criticism well). I think the mouth has too much focus, where a simpler, less-slanted mouth closer to under the nose would do just as much.
However, RD will never be as gorgeous as Lionel Messiah.
Anonymous2: @Smudge_Proof: I dunno, it's not 'busy' just ... it's off. I think it's more the angle and the expression then anything. The semi-focus on the hobbit-like foot is odd and the hardline between the thigh and torso is a bit much too.
Otherwise, I think the body lines are good and there's just enough muscle definition that it looks good.
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However, RD will never be as gorgeous as Lionel Messi
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Otherwise, I think the body lines are good and there's just enough muscle definition that it looks good.
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