Anonymous1: I just saw the previous versions (before you deleted just while ago) and I must say that her face now looks way better compared to the previous version :D good job
but (I'm very sorry that I didn't posted this in previous version but I was in work :/)
I just compared her head to your old comic with Diana http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Roflmann/182413/Dianas-inception-page-1
and I think that either
a) her eyes (or eyes, nose and mouth) are positioned a bit to low
or
b) hair should be positioned a bit lower
so her forehead should look so empty/big/bald
her mark glow could be more delicate (or even no glow) but it just depends on person taste I guess
and something else:
http://i.imgur.com/krzRd96.png?1
I just adore that loose/free hair behind her ears that cover her neck. It's small detail but it give more feminine effect for character
just check those hairstyles:
http://i.imgur.com/vvNSSlF.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/F898tJp.jpg
IMHO in your old comic Diana have similar hairstyle and perfect proportions between the forehead area and rest of face and place where hair starts
I hope that I didn't made you mad cause of all I typed or demotivated you for Diana and/or animations
Roflmann: @Anonymous: "I hope that I didn't made you mad cause of all I typed or demotivated you for Diana and/or animations"
Are you kidding me? In my current position, there's literally no way for me to get constructive critique in this type of thing. As a guy who draws, my only goal is to improve, and one of the most important parts of improving is critique! Thank you so much for all of your opinions! :D
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but (I'm very sorry that I didn't posted this in previous version but I was in work :/)
I just compared her head to your old comic with Diana http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Roflmann/182413/Dianas-inception-page-1
and I think that either
a) her eyes (or eyes, nose and mouth) are positioned a bit to low
or
b) hair should be positioned a bit lower
so her forehead should look so empty/big/bald
her mark glow could be more delicate (or even no glow) but it just depends on person taste I guess
and something else:
http://i.imgur.com/krzRd96.png?1
I just adore that loose/free hair behind her ears that cover her neck. It's small detail but it give more feminine effect for character
just check those hairstyles:
http://i.imgur.com/vvNSSlF.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/F898tJp.jpg
IMHO in your old comic Diana have similar hairstyle and perfect proportions between the forehead area and rest of face and place where hair starts
I hope that I didn't made you mad cause of all I typed or demotivated you for Diana and/or animations
"so her forehead wouldn't look so empty/big/bald"
- Reply
Are you kidding me? In my current position, there's literally no way for me to get constructive critique in this type of thing. As a guy who draws, my only goal is to improve, and one of the most important parts of improving is critique! Thank you so much for all of your opinions! :D