Ravehcok: Well I certainly haven't seen this incestual ship before. Not a bad drawing. I don't think I've seen this artist before. I don't mind them not being the same colour, but in my opinion, Caramel seems slightly too pale and Toffee could either be left there or perhaps made slightly paler. The background is... interesting. I kinda like it, and the sort of psuedo-swirls or whatever in the background could be a cool thing that I would appreciate, but would probably be better suited for a slightly different style or at least a different picture. Also how and where they meet with the white doesn't quite seem right. It's kind of distracting and I think it would work better if it was either a more gradual sort of fade, or if the skyline where it fades was all lower or something. The grass is perfect for this style. Her love juices are too opaque. The hair isn't bad, but it looks like it wouldn't have taken much more time or effort to make the highlighting better. Just make it a little less obvious. It's too much/too big as is. Maybe I'm overthinking a rough sketch, but just because it's a sketch or only done to a general level of non-final or non-intensive quality doesn't mean it has to be sloppy (I'm not insulting, and that's not quite the word I'm really looking for), and hey, I'm definitely not in the mood for females right now, so I guess this is what my mind does when I see straight or lesbian clop/hentai most of the time.
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