Anonymous1: ...Poser should be banned. Fucking christ that's horrifying.
Ok, so you wanna do Poser? Firstly, don't use the default human form for a non-human unless there is literally no difference between the two. LOOK AT THOSE FEET! Cannot unsee. Nice try but didn't work.
Nice enough tail I suppose. But good god, that skin. People are not shiny. Unless they are unwashed Mexicans, then they are shiny. Demona is not an unwashed Mexican. She's a washed Scottish Mexican. Tone down the shine my friend.
THAT HAIR! Why is is sprouting from her head like . . . actually, more like shooting from her head like a fountain. Srsly.
MASSIVE BOOBS. Actually, if that's your fetish, fine. Moving on.
Chains. Those chains holding her nipples would snap like twigs. Put some weight on them.
Lastly, the mirror effect. Things IRL (or even fantasy) very rarely perfectly mirror like that. Get a little 'hmph' to her stance. Hell, even coiling that shackle on the obttom a bit would add some dimension.
4N6: But some of the things Anon1 said are right... I mean, the feet of Demona ARE non-human, just watch the series! Maybe you rework this, please?!?
And just forget about the Mexican thing, someone's a little racist, I suppose.
Anonymous4: YOU STROKE BOY CRITICS CRACK ME THE FUCK UP
PICK PICK PICK IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT,DO SOMETHING BETTER,IF YOU CANT THEN SHUT THE FUCK UP AND ACCEPT IT
however,the bondage thing has to go,have you considered a pov blowjob scene as would be seen thru the guy getting sucked's eyes?
(and i don't mean from the point of view as if his eyes are on his HIP) shokan
it looks good tho....fuck those haters
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Ok, so you wanna do Poser? Firstly, don't use the default human form for a non-human unless there is literally no difference between the two. LOOK AT THOSE FEET! Cannot unsee. Nice try but didn't work.
Nice enough tail I suppose. But good god, that skin. People are not shiny. Unless they are unwashed Mexicans, then they are shiny. Demona is not an unwashed Mexican. She's a washed Scottish Mexican. Tone down the shine my friend.
THAT HAIR! Why is is sprouting from her head like . . . actually, more like shooting from her head like a fountain. Srsly.
MASSIVE BOOBS. Actually, if that's your fetish, fine. Moving on.
Chains. Those chains holding her nipples would snap like twigs. Put some weight on them.
Lastly, the mirror effect. Things IRL (or even fantasy) very rarely perfectly mirror like that. Get a little 'hmph' to her stance. Hell, even coiling that shackle on the obttom a bit would add some dimension.
Lastly lastly. Those wings. No.
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What a detailed description for something you didn't like (why click on it then?).
Moving on ^_^
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And just forget about the Mexican thing, someone's a little racist, I suppose.
PICK PICK PICK IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT,DO SOMETHING BETTER,IF YOU CANT THEN SHUT THE FUCK UP AND ACCEPT IT
however,the bondage thing has to go,have you considered a pov blowjob scene as would be seen thru the guy getting sucked's eyes?
(and i don't mean from the point of view as if his eyes are on his HIP) shokan
it looks good tho....fuck those haters