Fartacus: Yeah, the anus is really high. Shouldn't be hard to fix if you, say, enlarge the butt to give the image that she's really raising it up — all you'd have to do for that is raise the top of the butt-area you've got there. I also don't think the underwear should make it to the final product, as they look really two-dimensional and slapped-on.
Look at me, I'm offering serious art critique on Paheal! I must be some kind of weirdo!
R_L: I'll admit, I used another's work as a model, but I DID NOT trace it.
Here's a side by side of the two (with mine sized up to the same scale): http://img718.imageshack.us/i/sidebyside.jpg/
And my original, full-scale, scanned drawing: http://img704.imageshack.us/i/drawin123001.jpg/
I will also say that taka's is significantly better than mine...:( LOL
R_L: Damn anons busting my balls. The anus is a bit high, the underwear was done last, and the back of her hair is starting to piss me off. OH, and apparently it's a trace...:eyeroll:...:Sigh:...
R_L: "Really generic pose or at least it feels like it since I've seen exactly same thing couple times already."
I know the pose is a bit played out. You can find the same exact pose for Rukia, Renamon, Code Geass, etc; and of course taka's original work. I decided to use it as a model because it's always been a favorite of mine. :/
Izen: People will bitch about everything. Learn that or you won't survive on the intrawebz. All I want to know it WHAT IS THIS SHIT?!?! http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/9471/34523355.png
R_L: Honestly, I couldn't tell you. A side gut? LOL. I know it needs some tweaking, I did it pretty quickly. Those are on the list of things I hate about the drawing, a very long list at this point... LOL.
Anonymous7: I don't really have any qualms with the anatomy (below the belt, anyway). Her face is what looks a bit odd to me. It's kinda disproportionate looking, and the mouth looks really odd.
R_L: The pose is very common. I only planned on making a few adjustments and work the shading, but I don't even know if it will be any better. This might be the final product, I suppose it's better than nothing though.
Ensse: Dude...this is looking fucking awesome. Yes, it does look like a trace, but I'll take your word for it if you say you only used a reference picture. But please, do finish this. It's the best 34 of Astrid I've seen so far (still looking).
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Look at me, I'm offering serious art critique on Paheal! I must be some kind of weirdo!
Here's a side by side of the two (with mine sized up to the same scale): http://img718.imageshack.us/i/sidebyside.jpg/
And my original, full-scale, scanned drawing: http://img704.imageshack.us/i/drawin123001.jpg/
I will also say that taka's is significantly better than mine...:( LOL
I know the pose is a bit played out. You can find the same exact pose for Rukia, Renamon, Code Geass, etc; and of course taka's original work. I decided to use it as a model because it's always been a favorite of mine. :/
https://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/386853#search=sawao
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http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/4623/drawin123001redline.jpg
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Also, hot viking girl is hot.